Onyxscream of Shadowclan

[shads]

i couldn't find one that exactly fit her. but all this one needs is blue eyes here it is.

O N Y X S C R E A M

36 moons | female | shadowclan | warrior

I think I saw you in my sleep, darling,
I think I saw you in my dreams you were
Stitching up the seams on every broken promise
That your body couldn't keep.
I think I saw you in my sleep.

I thought I heard the door open, oh no,
I thought I heard the door open but
I only heard it close.

A black she-cat with shining blue eyes and a white tipped tail and paws.

''APPEARANCE;;
A long legged she-cat, Onyxscream stands out from most Riverclan warriors. Her fur is the color of a starless night. She is a tall and lean warrior, with small paws and long tail to keep her balance. Her eyes are a shining blue, but there is nothing special about them. Just simple orbs that show no emotion. She has a scar from her left eye to her chin, framing the side of her face. her short fur does not do her well at hiding it, but she does not mind. her paws are white, as is the tip of her tail.

''PERSONALITY;;
Onxyscream is a simple enough she-cat to understand. She says what she wishes, when she wishes, and how she wishes to do so. No warrior, tom or she-cat, intimadates her, or at least, none that she has met. She has a strong heart and sharp mind, always quick to respond to any comment with a smart remark. She is not easily angered, and is almost always calm. Her voice is soft and smooth at normal, but when she gets mad it has a certain coldness to it. When she is angered, her tongue forgets it's place and often times she says things that do not need to be said. She is an excellent hunter, but does not enjoy fighting. Not that she can't, just that if she doesn't have to, she won't. She hates to hurt others, and will do anything in her power not to. For this reason, she finds it hard to say no to those she loves and cares about. A stranger now, that's a different story. She's a cautious she-cat, and with good reason to be. Onxyscream refuses to be someones pet, and is always the leader in a group. Or she tries to be. She will gladly let someone make their own mistakes, though. She believes mistakes are the only way a cat can learn. You can tell them over and over and over again, but in the end they will only believe you until they experience it themselves.

''HISTORY;;

''KIT LIFE;;
As a kit, Onyxscream was a wonderful she-cat. Her mother and father loved each other and her and her sibling. She only had one littermate, her sister. Her sister and her were never close, but she didn't mind. Her sister, Ravenkit, was always one to whine and could never be pleased. Onyxscream grew tired of her sister's constant complaints, but never said anything bad about her. She loved her sister, regardless of the black kit's faults.

''APPRENTICE;;
When they became apprentices, Ravenpaw became more intrested in Starclan than was scary. She would ask questions about where you would go if you didn't go to Starclan, and such silly, demonic questions. She would ask them out in the open, as if not ashamed of what she was implying. The look in her dark blue eyes grew harder with each day, and Onyxscream was getting quite worried. She went to tell mother and father one day about their daughter, but could not find them. She went out in the territories and attempted to locate her parents, but could not. When she was almost back to camp, Ravenpaw was awaiting her. She demanded to know where she had been, but Ravenpaw only smiled and said that their parents had taken a vacation, and would never return. Her own sister tackled her to the ground, and Onyxscream made no move to fight back. Her sister had her on her stomach, and her face was close that Onxyscream could feel her sister's breath on her cheek. Her sister told her she would let her live, but only because she had done nothing wrong, not because she loved her. She was about to get off her when her sister suddenly tore her claw into the side of face and made the scar from her eye to her chin. "So you will never forget me." her sister's cold voice had whispered as she left. The hardest part was explaining everything to the clan

''WARRIOR;;
The rest of Onxyscream's life was uneventful. She became a warrior, friends came and go, nothing worth remembering in her past. She never did find out what happened to her parents, and she never did know where Ravenpaw went off to.

''RP EX;;

A gentle sounding of paw steps echoed off the rocks in the river. A lean black she-cat jumped gracefully from rock to rock. If she wasn't moving, no one would be able to see her on this starless night. If not for her white paws and tip of her tail, she would be engulfed by the shadows. She feared the shadows. She feared she would never come back out if they drug her in. She truly believed the shadows had gotten to her sister, but she never spoke the accusation aloud. Her worst fears would hopefully never be confirmed because she would hopefully never see her sister again. She silently wished her dead, but she knew this was probably wrong. Her sister was a fighter at heart, and even her mentor had a hard time teaching her things she did not know. She had not been cocky with her fighting, but was patient. She took the time to figure out the weakness in her opponent, and waited for them to make a mistake. Or at least, that was how she was. The ebony she-cat had not seen her sister in over 26 moons.

Not that she missed her any.

Onxyscream of Riverclan jumped silently ashore. Her paws sunk into the wet sand and she quickly jumped onto solid ground, shaking the sand from her paws. How she hated sand. She continued to walk close to the bank, but not so close she was in the sand. Her eyes searched the water for any signs of movement. After a while of scouring the water, her eyes locked on what she had been looking for. She made her way to the water's edge, her mind too intent on not messing this up to notice the sticky sand making its way between her claws. She made an easy jump, at least to her with her long legs, to a rock close to the center of the river. Her eyes kept watch on the almost unnoticeable movement beneath the water. Patiently she waited by the water for her prey to come to her. As the fish made it's way unknowingly into her trap, her paw scooped down into the water and back up again with a fish skewered on her claws. She smiled as she hit the head on the rock, instantly killing the thrashing creature. She put it in her mouth, and with no more worries of her sister and parents she walked back to camp a satisfied warrior.

[nova|nebula]

ACCEPTED
Good job. :] Like I said before, I love her. Welcome again to Hoodwinked and We Welcome Onyxscream to Shadowclan.